The day I met you my life turned new My life felt it had been brightened We had good times, I wrote you rhymes We held each other, like every lover You told me you loved me, I listened But then came days when by my side You seemed so very far behind Something was different, you had changed My vision of you began to get deranged Everyday I contemplate What is the reason you hesitate? I wish we were back to our old ways All was full of love on winter days I held your hand, you held mines Souls were met and intertwined But no more, too late for mends Just left to think Is this what happens when winter ends?
100% traditional media, smudges of prisma marker and sketch done with 0.5 lead pencil (:
Oh, God, i have nothing to say apart that i luv the eye where blood (or tears? ) is sheding (i"m not sure that i used the good word >< Why my english is so crappy? T^T)
I like the blue colors of the drawing about Kyle.
Well, it's not a real critics (but i try to give some constructive one, you know?) but i'm not fond of the yellow color.
Well, indeed i find the ~pink one, the green and blue together are good but not at all the yellow. it's cool but just cool XP
Well i say that but i love your drawing and i don't want to give you some order or everything else. I hope you don't think i try to insult you or something like that T^T
You poem is good too. I have some difficulties to understand everything because of my stupide crappy english but i thinks that it's a good one.
Then, i have just finished your comic online with Kyle^^
And it's really good! I really love to read the "adventures" and the thought of Kyle who is just a so great character. I love how he thinks, how he acts and the fact that i likes just the new guy (i didn't remember his name o_O really sorry.)
This new guy, in fact, is not my favourit cuz he seems to be so perfect but i thinks it's because of Kyle who just love him! it's cute^^
And i love his sister. She's really cool.
Well good job, i hope to see more^^
And really sorry for my long and uninteressant comment (with my fucking stupid bad englis T^T I would like to improve)
haha, no worries about the long comment xD the yellow was just there, haha! sorry if the yellow seems off >_> the whole drawing was just a quick doodle (:
And about Daniel, he's not that perfect xD buuuut that's another story
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it's nice.
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The ninja of nonsense.
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"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay down his life for his friends." John 15:13
Switched accounts, I'm now at ~fqtt !!!
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I am an overly hormoned teenager that likes to wear a pair of orange converse.
AWESOME
....I should get prismacolors... last time I had them my little sister murdered them... same with my colored pencils.
Evil little people.
I love how this came out... it rocks lots.
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( >'_' )># i was ganna give you this waffle
#< ('_'< ) but then i was like
( >'#'< ) im hungry
( >'_'< ) so i ate it
( >^_^< )
my mouth dropped i love the colors
<3
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Eradicate.
I like the blue colors of the drawing about Kyle.
Well, it's not a real critics (but i try to give some constructive one, you know?) but i'm not fond of the yellow color.
Well, indeed i find the ~pink one, the green and blue together are good but not at all the yellow. it's cool but just cool XP
Well i say that but i love your drawing and i don't want to give you some order or everything else. I hope you don't think i try to insult you or something like that T^T
You poem is good too. I have some difficulties to understand everything because of my stupide crappy english but i thinks that it's a good one.
Then, i have just finished your comic online with Kyle^^
And it's really good! I really love to read the "adventures" and the thought of Kyle who is just a so great character. I love how he thinks, how he acts and the fact that i likes just the new guy (i didn't remember his name o_O really sorry.)
This new guy, in fact, is not my favourit cuz he seems to be so perfect but i thinks it's because of Kyle who just love him! it's cute^^
And i love his sister. She's really cool.
Well good job, i hope to see more^^
And really sorry for my long and uninteressant comment (with my fucking stupid bad englis T^T I would like to improve)
And about Daniel, he's not that perfect xD buuuut that's another story
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